I sowed a seed of a new relation
I watered it with love, nourished it with affection
It grew huge and tall like trees of Amazon
It caught everyone’s eye, it gained wonderful attention
I loved to see my little sapling soar so high
I thought I was with the perfect man, I wouldn’t deny
The seemingly never-ending pleasure was so nigh
That I never realized, there can be a day when I have to confront a “GOODBYE”
My tree faced the first blazing storm
And experienced how if feels when there is no warmth
And then came the gossip bees, hundreds in a swarm
But my love tree struggled out, these trifling things couldn’t beat its form
But fighting the foes, it had gone weak
The emphatic plant, was turning meek
Its leaves were shedding, for the world seem bleak
But I didn’t let it fall, I secured the leak
My tree grew again with all its might
But this time not alone, I was holding tight
It withstood the scorching days and the dark nights
For the lame men, it was a breath taking sight
But gradually my tree was getting old
And with it my man was getting cold
I was about to face a story untold
The rain had gone, but the winter was ready to unfold
I could experience the chill and the paling leaves
With every drying flower, my chest’s painful heaves
The loss of each thread of love that I dearly weaved
The utter sadness which everyone in love receives
Alas! Here comes the snow
And my love tree has its heart beat low
I approached my man with my footsteps slow
And I could hear him say an icy ‘NO’
For my plant, those couple of letters, were the last
The tree fell with another blast
With the countable breaths, it remembered the past
But those precious breaths left it fast
With my love tree dead, my heart has also lost its beat
Tears flow down, splashing on my feet
His knife of sorrow has penetrated deep
Such that I yelp, I cry in sleep
I looked for him at all the places
I found him, but to his love not any traces
What should I say? I am out of letters, words or phrases
With my love tree dead, what is left are just empty spaces!
nice wrk aashima... liked some phrases.. Good!
ReplyDeletethnku shobs!!!...but you couldnt write a shorter comment na...huh!!..:X!!!..lolzz...:)
ReplyDeletehehe,, ok,, it's amazing.. wonderful.. 10 stars... but actually tina has already ritten a similar poem titled, "The story of a love plant"... your poem-topics are getting old... lol
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ReplyDeleteahan.......ab kya karu ive soo many "title chors" surrounding me!!!...afta u wrote da comment...i chkd out her poem...nd yes i agree its soo similar!!...man we hav ssoo damn similar thghts...i neva knew she had ritten a poem lik tht...or if at all ive read it i didn't remebr it at all when i was riting..huh..hard luk...now u see wht i bring out..in da 10th poem!!!
ReplyDeletelol... well, seriously.. you hv written so similar to mine. but nice one. i guess, yurs is better.
ReplyDeletenhn yar...nuthin lik comparison!!...we both r gud...!!!
ReplyDeleteerr,, BOTH r gud? NAHH.. Aish's better!! lol :D
ReplyDeletefyn...i accept!!...she's also senior to me...actually not...ive been riting frm long...but yeah pub;ically she is!!>..nd i completely own up..she is betta thn both of us shob!!
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