Tuesday, February 10, 2009

I still dream with my eyes open....


oh when i realized
that you are gone
my heart told me
that i am all alone
with these fingers dead
there is no sensation
my guitar longs for a new vibration

just then i close my eyes
i remember our love paradise
the first time you held my hand
with footprints on the golden sand
but then the truth screams, i am all awaken
but i still dream with my eyes open...

those days have left and the spring has slept
the mighty ocean has lost its depth
do u remember our first kiss?
our love was an eternal bliss
your ignorance has struck me broken
but i still dream with my eyes open...

today the sunshine feels too bright
all hues have merged in a single white
the birds are quiet, the clowns are sad
a hungry beggar was treated bad
everything is under a bad omen
but i still dream with my eyes open...

it is hard to forget the past to pass
sweet memories flee, only melancholies last
you came and went leaving me behind
do i still exist in your heart or mind?
but i truly owe my life to you
coz u wiped my tears when my days were blue
our crystal clear air of love has now smokened,
but i still dream with my eyes open...

6 comments:

  1. This is your first poem!!! UNBELIEVABLE!!! You deserve a standing ovation!!! amazingly rittn,, u present yourself so beautifully,, I simply adore the way you pen your thoughts down! I dont hv many wrds in ur appreciation BUT you're the BEST!!! I mean it ^_^

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  2. so sweet.... you're perfect wid words..... i dont have wrds 2 praise the poem.... wonderful... so, one new great poetess... :)

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  3. bas karo yarr.......im drownin now.....althoudgh i knw hoe 2 swim...hehehe...but c'mon....its enough!!...well bt still thnx...i didnt knw my wrk will b appreciated 2 this xtent!!!...thnx 4 encouaging me guyzz...lub ya!!

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  4. We never encouraged you aashi,, aish aur main toh tere mazze le rahe hain... oolele, bechaari bachchi serious ho gayi kya?? hehehe

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  5. shut up shobhit!!!.............luk there goes an angry smiley!!.:X..huh!!

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